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Chapter 133: Genius Beautiful Girl

Yinglili has been peeping at the door since the beginning.

When she saw a certain beauty with black stockings, she immediately understood that this must be another masterpiece of An Yilunye.

hateful.

Invite two people at the same time.

But what about others now?

Moreover, that guy from Gaoban You Ye actually sat next to Shiyu Zhiqiu!

Isn't he gay?

Could it be that a gay man would also be captured by Kasumigaoka, a fat woman with black stockings?

Immediately afterwards.

When she saw Kasumigaoka Shiyu getting up and leaving her seat, far away from him, Eirili almost laughed out loud.

Isn't this just being disliked?

However, Gaoban You Ye was still playing with his mobile phone calmly and was not affected at all.

after a little while.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't bear the loneliness, sighed, stood up and returned to the seat next to him to sit down.

"What, senior sister, didn't you want to stay away from me? Why are you back again?"

Gao Ban You Ye looked at her with a half-smile.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu was very calm.

"I'm not afraid that, my junior, you won't be able to accept the disappointment of being alienated by a beautiful girl for a while. How about being with a beautiful girl like me up close, doesn't it feel good?"

When she finished speaking, she showed a charming smile.

Gao Ban You Ye knows that she wants to tease him, but she is not too young.

"I don't feel it."

"How about, Kasumigaoka-senpai, please stay away from me? Maybe I will be really disappointed and cry."

"Oh~!"

Seeing his teasing attitude, Kasumigaoka Shiyu curled her lips in displeasure.

After calming down, Kasumigaoka Shiyu smiled and said to him.

"Junior Gaoban, congratulations on your book, it's going to be a big seller."

"This hasn't been sold yet. Ms. Machida Enko said that 200,015 copies will be printed first, but if it doesn't sell, I will be disappointed."

"Hahahaha. Don't worry, I will promote it for you."

Seeing the bitter look on his face, Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't help but laugh.

"Promotion? It's on the author's Twitter account, I don't pay much attention to it. However, I am still very grateful to my senior sister for her support."

Gao Ban You Ye also laughed.

Faced with the kindness of the beautiful girl, I accepted it.

"But, senior sister, have you finished revising the second volume of "Metronome of Love"? I plan to be your first fan."

"Not yet. I'm not a tentacle monster like you. How can I write so fast?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't help but give him a lovely eye roll.

She was quite willing to chat with him.

They have a common topic, they are in the same library, the authors are the same editor, and they are both high school students.

Moreover, chatting with Gaoban You Ye did not feel stressful at all, but felt very natural and relaxed.

"Why am I a tentacle monster?"

Gaoban You Ye felt depressed for a while.

"Is not it?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu crossed her hands, glanced at him sideways, and raised one of her slender legs.

Wrapped in those shiny black silk stockings, she exuded amazing charm, as if she had stepped out of a comic book.

"I heard from Sister Yuanzi that not only did you finish the first and second volumes, but you also guaranteed the third volume and said you would never delay the manuscript.

"But I'm still worried about the second volume."

Looking at Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's resentful look, Gao Banyou was also happy.

After thinking for a while, he comforted.

"Don't worry, senior sister. Our routes are different. I take the plot route, and adventure stories are good, but you take the excellence and emotional route.

"Your writing style is better than mine, so it's normal to have high requirements for your own works. Taking your time is the best way to go.

"Compared to you, I am really slow. I am still conceiving the character of the second heroine. w

Kasumigaoka Shiyu rolled her eyes at him when she heard this.

How can I compare to a tentacle monster like you?

"Junior Gaoban, tell me, how do I set up my second heroine? Can you tell me more about your idea from last time?"

Having said this, she looked at Gaoban You Ye with bright eyes, showing an expectant expression.

"Of course. If you are willing to listen, senior sister."

Gao Ban You Ye smiled and responded to her.

"The Sayuka in Senior's book is modeled after herself, right? She is a big sister with excellent grades but a shadow in her heart..."

Having said this, he gave her a strange look.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu blushed, but still planned to listen.

It's so shameful to say that I have a shadow in my heart.

"The first volume is about the heroine Sayuka meeting the male protagonist, being attracted to him, and then healing her heartache.

"At the end of the first volume, the relationship between the hero and Sayuka should be more than friends, not lovers."

"In short, the two of them have each other in their hearts, but neither of them has the courage to confess. In other words, they are both waiting for the other to confess."

"Then for the second volume. Senior sister, you can set up a childhood sweetheart of the male protagonist to appear. It would be best if he is a tsundere with blonde hair and double ponytails, and the kind who doesn't mean what he means. This will give him a more sense of character."

Hearing this, the question arises.

"But, Mr. Gaoban, wouldn't it look cliché to have blond hair with twin tails? Many games have arrogant childhood sweethearts with blond hair like this. Will it make readers feel aesthetic fatigue?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu was like a studious top student, looking at him eagerly, waiting for his answer.

"conventional?"

Hearing this, Gao Ban You Ye smiled.

"Senior sister, I understand where your card is."

"well?"

Kasumigaoka was stunned for a moment, then motioned for him to continue.

"Sister, you definitely want to write the second volume as a masterpiece, but you don't want to repeat the character attributes or plots of other people's works, so you fall into the situation of "Kavin".

"Even if it was written reluctantly, Editor Machida wouldn't be satisfied, right?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyes lit up, that's it!"

He really hit the point!

Gao Ban You Ye smiled and continued to explain.

“This is a problem that writers all fall into, and it’s also a kind of author’s disease.

"Author's Disease?"

"That's right."

"The so-called writer's disease is a disease in which one only wants to amuse himself and write the stories in his heart, but also longs for someone to understand the stories he has written. If he is rejected by others, he does not want to change them.

"Such a person will continue to write even if his works are not recognized by others."

"To sum up, it is a writer's disease that involves oneself becoming a character in the book and only willing to write to oneself to satisfy one's own spiritual needs."

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu fell into deep thought.

The heroine in her book is written based on herself. It can be said that "Sayuga" is herself.

and.

The story of Sayuka being healed of her heartache and overcoming her shadow by the male protagonist, isn't it the story of her longing for a romantic love, being protected, and being pampered?

This is quite normal for a girl in her prime.

According to Gao Ban You Ye, what kind of writer did he become after changing his mind?

Because I was satisfied with what I wrote, I couldn't break through. I didn't want to repeat other people's plots, I just wanted to write a unique story.

In the end, she fell into an endless loop and the book she wrote was not recognized by the editor.

In fact, if she can no longer produce decent works, "Metronome of Love" will be cut in half after the second volume.

"You're back, senior. What I mean by this is not that you have a serious writer's disease. You are a truly great writer, and of course you are very good."

"I mean, you just fell into a misunderstanding."

"Ideological misunderstanding?"

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu became even more curious.

She subconsciously moved closer to him, staring at him with longing eyes.

She wants to know more!

"Yes, he is a thinker"

Senior sister, you think some plots and character settings that are similar to others are cliche, right?"

"But before thinking about this, you have to think about one thing."

"whats the matter?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu has become a curious baby.

Regarding writing, no one had ever said that to her, and Machida Enko couldn't give her any substantive advice.

So now she's getting guidance, and she's excited.

She had read Gaoban You Ye's book, and her first impression was that it would definitely be a hit!

"It's very simple, Kasumigaoka-senpai, you have to understand what the purpose of your book is."

"The first one is for self-entertainment, written for myself to satisfy my inner regrets."

"The second one is very tacky, because of the royalties."

"You have to understand why Editor Machida ruined your second volume? It was because it wasn't popular enough.

"The clichéd plot and clichéd characters are the factors that determine the bestsellers."

"You have read my book. I have a blonde and arrogant sister character and a silver-haired royal sister character in it. Aren't these very similar to other people's characters?"

"You have read the previous authors' books, and theirs are also cliche. The same plot, with a different name, has become a popular masterpiece.

"So, senior sister, don't think it's cliché and try every means to avoid it. This will only make your work full of holes. 11

"Doing this will not only make your work lose its soul, but you will also become stuck and unable to continue writing."

"Senior sister, the combination of your beautiful writing style and clichéd plot is your best talent. Don't let the so-called clichés constrain your growth." 557

After listening to his words, Kasumigaoka Shiyu fell into deep thought.

really.

She was stuck on the character design, and she just wanted to avoid clichés and create a different character, a popular character.

"So, Kasumigaoka-senpai, in your second volume, you can completely set up a blonde tsundere with twin tails, appear as the hero's childhood sweetheart, and then compete with Sayuka for the hero.

"In the later stage, you can also set up another female character from the Skyfall series, and torture them over and over again to make them and the male protagonist like each other. But in the end, isn't it still you, the creator, who decides the winner?"

"I see..."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyes lit up completely.

The problem that has been confusing me has finally been solved.

She brought the characters into the book, so she just wanted to give Sayuka the ending she wanted, but because she had never experienced love, even though her writing was good, it seemed unreal.

So she wanted to write something different, but she hit a dead end.

Ling Gao Board You Ye suddenly became enlightened when he said this.

She has good writing skills.

Writing that is just self-satisfying cannot meet the readers' requirements, so Machida Enko is drunk with her second volume.

But as long as you understand this, what she is going to write next will be very clear.

What can make the editor agree is that it sells well, and coupled with her writing style and clichéd plot, she may not be able to write a work that is eye-catching.

The unique writing style is originally a novelty. As long as it is written by her, it is not cliché!

Because there are really not many people in this world whose writing skills are better than her, a top student.

A genius beautiful girl writer, I don’t just talk about it casually.

Now Kasumigaoka Shiyu is so inspired that she explodes.

"Thank you, Gaoban-kun."

"You're welcome. I was just talking casually. Thank God if you don't think I made it up, senior." Gao Ban You Ye waved his hand and said with a smile.

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu rolled her eyes at him angrily.

How could anyone say that about himself?

All these random fabrications are so reasonable...

Believe it or not!

She has already determined in her heart that Gao Ban You Ye must be that kind of genius writer.

An Yilun, a pure "reader", was immediately outclassed by the high-ranking board member You Ye. .